Friday, March 19, 2010

Loss, Loss, and More Loss - Elizabeth Weld Nolan

It’s not always death. Sometimes
it’s their sea glass collection
filling a jar, the water dried,
lucent greens dulled. The shop window
reflecting, sideways, us, old now.

Sometimes it is. A cat food
dish washed and put away. Phone
numbers crossed out. Stopping surprised
by the photo beside the cabinet: This smile
once occupied a whole heart.

3 comments:

  1. This is just wonderful! I especially love the second stanza. The first line is perfect. The final line is perfect. And really, all the rest is just so lovely.

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  2. I really liked this poem the first time I read it and reading it again, it is pretty great. Very confident collection of details to build up to a poignant sense of loss.

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  3. Oh, this is beautiful. I almost cried. I especially loved the images of "Phone numbers crossed out." and the sadness of "This smile once occupied a whole heart." You are truly a talented poet.

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