Monday, May 25, 2009

Home - Donna Shomer

If I could
reach back
to that attic –
If I could do it again –
I would take
more time.
I wouldn’t
be afraid.
I would savor
the ripping sound
of the tape
opening every box.

2 comments:

  1. I had to post this one as well. You got so much into that one detail - 'the ripping sound of the tape opening every box.' I found myself thinking about it over and over.

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  2. I still love both these pieces, succinct, sense-ual, real. You paint broad strokes with a thin brush. Well done!

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