Perhaps it’s taste of lemon that brings
a hint of loss, the tart, acid juice
that wrinkles the face and puckers
the mouth. Or maybe it’s sugar
blurring the clean, sharp perspective,
making it acceptable like a wife
hushing the ranting husband
before he has his say.
Or the other way around.
Friday, June 18, 2010
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So nice to be reading you again! I love 'a hint of loss,' and I love the way you compare the effect of sugar to the hushing. Just lovely. btw, I also loved your Mint Condition piece.
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