Sunday, April 26, 2009

Boogie, Man - Camilla Basham

Just hanging with Jack;
thinks he’s Dean Moriarty;
dressed all in black;
sipping a brew in a smoke filled room;
rolling the dice;
hoping it lands on seven;
rolling up to the bar;
hoping he lands on a babe.
He breaks out his moves;
she’s hot and blonde.
I’m straining to see them through the fog of smoke;
can’t tell if he’s making progress.
Just then, man, she lifts her tiny manicured hand
and smacks him across the face.
I almost spit out my beer.
And there he comes;
sauntering back to the table
with a sheepish grin on his face.
He puts out his cigarette;
runs his hand through his hair and exclaims,
“This place is a dive. Let’s boogie, man.”
Look at him.
Even with the hand mark from some hot blonde
embedded on his face
he still thinks he’s Dean Moriarty.

3 comments:

  1. I love this poem! You completely create this world with your details. And the line, 'Even with the hand mark from some hot blonde embedded in his face he still thinks he's Dean Moriarty' is just brilliant.

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  2. You have created such a tangible scene. I am addicted....

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  3. Cap'n Paul, would love to see your writing on here.

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