Her name was Linda.
The last memory I have of her
is a walk we took along the shore
at tin can beach.
It was a warm day
late summer 1972.
I was so little and she so tall;
I had to reach up to hold her hand.
She had such pretty hands,
fingernails painted the color of red begonias.
She was wearing a pair of low denim pants –
so low that I could see the crack of her rear end.
Her hand-made crocheted poncho had
fringe at the bottom,
and a tie around the neck
with pom poms hanging off it;
it was red like her finger nails.
I was mesmerized by the wind;
blowing her long blonde hair
and the red poncho
in perfect agreement.
I remember the smell of the salt water.
The sounds--the gulls,
waves crashing so restless,
bright white sunlight burning my eyes. .
We never wore shoes.
I can still feel the tarry stuff on my feet;
it gets in the sand from the oil wells
drilling across the coast Hwy
like angry black steel horses.
I remember the smell of her cigarette smoke
mixed with salt air and her perfume.
You had to walk carefully,
over the rusty tin can graveyard.
We just walked--
carefully walked.
Thursday, August 6, 2009
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The sensual details in this are just perfect! I love the red fingernails and the red poncho. I love the tarry sand, the smell of cigarettes and salt air, the drills like angry black steel horses. And I love the the last line. This is all so vivid & moody, and really well done.
ReplyDeleteAmazing! I felt like I was there. Beautiful prose.
ReplyDeleteI love this description. This gives a sense of a child's love and adoration for some beautiful creature, as well as a vivid feel for time and place-- that whole early 70's feel is there, best use of beach tar since Joni Mitchell's song "California." Well done!
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